2011年10月10日月曜日

Essay Outline


Research Question:
How can Japanese government increase Japanese interest in music?

Thesis statement:
1) Japanese government should more financial assist for musicians.
2) Japanese government should present more opportunity for Japanese to have interest in music through education.

Introduction
A.     (Hook)
B.      (Background)
C.      Thesis statement

Ⅰ. Present condition and problems
A. Musicians don’t have fitting compensation for their labors.
B. Japanese people have less opportunity to listen music.

Ⅱ. Why Japanese slight music though music brings good influence to them?
A. Relating to Japanese cultural themes.
B. Positive point of listening music.

Ⅲ.Comparing governmental support to musicians of France and that of Japan.
A.     Insurance system
B.      Educational system

Conclusion
A.     Repeat thesis and main points
B.

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